मेरे बेटे के नाम ..

सात समन्दर पार से                                                

दुनिया के बाज़ार से

जब मैं कल अपने घर आया

देरे रात थी सब सोये थे

तुमको भी सोता पाया

यूं तो हमेशा यूं होता है

मैं तुमको दुबका लेता हूं

पर उस पल ना जाने क्यों

लेट तुम्हारे पास लग यूं

कि मैं तुम में सिमट गया हूं

छोटे से सीने से लग कर

मेरी आंखें भीग गयीं

एक एक पल में ही जैसे

कितनी सदियां बीत गयीं

उठती गिरती सांसों का

एक अजब एहसास थे तुम

मैं ही तुम से दूर गया था

मेरे कितने पास थे तुम

वक़्त का चरखा डोलेगा

और निर्बल हो जाऊंगा मैं

पास तुम्हारे मेरे बेटे

खुद को पाने आऊंगा मैं

~ By Aahang

14 comments on “मेरे बेटे के नाम ..

  1. Rina says:

    So beautiful..

    A parents love expressed so touchingly..

    When I hold my daughters in my arms close to my heart.. i literally pause and drink in those moments.. the comfort.. the solace..swells up my heart.. and I live in those treasured moments.. and then i realise i am enjoying so much i have even forgotten to breathe

    Such is parents love and then next I think about my parents and the love they have given me..

    • aahang says:

      Children are precious..vulnerable themselves and yet a source of strength and hope for the world around.
      Thank you for sharing your emotions.

  2. falaque says:

    really nice.
    shabdon ka chayan bahut accha hi.

  3. बहुत सुन्दर! 🙂

    उसे मेरा बहुत सारा प्यार देना और मेरी तरफ़ से एक चाकलेट :)..

    शायद कभी मै भी अपने बच्चे के लिये कुछ लिखू तो ऐसे ही लिखु..

    • aahang says:

      Hi Pankaj,
      Thanks for your comment and the chocolate for Anant.I will tell him it’s from Pankaj Uncle !
      I am sure whenever you do write a poem for your son it will be a masterpiece, if not for the world but certainly for the two of you.

  4. Saurabh Prasad says:

    Too Good! It was as if I was reliving the moments..

  5. Anonymous says:

    this is such a wonderful thought penned up here. This is a feelign that all parents have. It feels so comforting and blissful to cuddle your child up – seene se lagakar!! thank you bhai for writing this!!

  6. shilpa says:

    Another masterpiece, keep it up – your journey to the booker or gyanpeeth or yourself. Reads like from another world..inspired, wonderful

    • aahang says:

      Thanks for the kind words.I know you feel pretty much the same for Naina so you can relate to what went on in my mind when I wrote this.

  7. Ravi Sharan says:

    Jogi ki vyatha Jogi jaane.

    Ek chhota sa vichaar jo kalpana ke daayaron se pare kahin Ishwar ki Paathshala mein banta hai , woh ek Paalne mein leta hum par ek meethe suroor ki tarah chaa jata hai aur hamse seekhne ke saath hamara shikshak ban jaata hai.

    Pita hona janm dene se kahin zyaada ek aabhas hai us kal ka jisse hum aaj samhal rahe hain.

    • aahang says:

      Aapne jise kal jiya wo hum aaj jee rahe hain aur jo aaj aapka wartmaan hai kal hamaara bhavishya hoga.The firts time we met Saransh was about the same age as Anant is now.Somewhere this post is inspired by the beautiful relationship you share with your son.God bless !

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