Tum kya kahogi ?

मैं हां कहूंगा

तो तुम ना कहोगी

मैं ना कहूंगा

तो तुम हां कहोगी

मैं ठहरा हूँ

और सोच रहा हूँ

कि आखिर अब

तुम क्या कहोगी ?

~ आहंग

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14 comments on “Tum kya kahogi ?

  1. bahut acchi rachanajaise gagar me sagar bharna

  2. Short and Crisp. Main aur tarif karunga to tum takalluf kahogi…

  3. Aizaz says:

    शानदार रचना

  4. Simply awesome. 🙂

  5. aruna3 says:

    Wonderful emotion in poem.

  6. Hindi looks so beautiful!

    Hope you follow and check out my book/blog, too! It’s a book, so good to start from the beginning (Prologue/Intro/ Chapter 1…). Press menu, chapters for the chapters in order. Would love some feedback.

    Have a great day there!

    P.S. An error message comes up when I try to follow your blog. 😦

  7. Madhusudan says:

    Waah….bahut khub.

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